The soles of my bare feet pounded the pavement. Loose pieces of gravel met the already-toughed skin.
While my legs sped my body past the houses toward the end of my street, my arms swung widely, back to front. Doing so with my arms always made me feel like I was running faster.
I threw a glance over my shoulder and spotted my older brother slamming the door to our house. Before we made eye contact, my neck twisted back forward and my eyes settled on the curve of the road.
I knew he was behind me. Not far now. With his taller, leaner body he was always faster than me. Stronger than me.
I let out a strangled, frustrated scream as it became hard to breathe through the humidity and the tiny rocks started cutting skin. I heard my brother laugh.
Two seconds and his arms grabbed me.
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My dad liked to trick us kids. We’d do something that warranted a whipping and he’d act nonchalant, as if there was no need to discipline us. Ten, twenty, something an hour later he’d come out of nowhere, belt in hand.
So, we learned to watch. If dad went anywhere near his bedroom in the hour after we’d done something bad, there was a 90 percent chance he was grabbing his belt.
Whenever I’d see my dad calmly make his way into his room, I’d throw myself out the front door and run. This is how I attempted to elude punishment. Sometimes I’d come back home and sit in the front yard until I was sure my dad forgot about me.
But sometimes my older brother thought it would be funny to catch me and bring me back.
Zarah, I hope this is a work of fiction and not a memoir of a writer. Very poignant and beautifully written. Unfortunately it reminds me, not if my father, who was a kind gentle soul, but my adoptive mother.
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Hi there, it is memoir. However, I view this memory in a very lighthearted way. I’m having trouble conveying that in this piece, I recognize.
It’s actually something I joke about now with the brother that did this.
It’s a work in progress! Thanks for reading.
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Oh, this memory brought me way back with my older brother. The things that he thought would be fun, or funny, but were definitely not so to me. And like you mention in the comments above – there are moments that seem truly harrowing or frightening, but that we somehow find ourselves able to make light of as grown-ups, as if they bring us closer together…
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I have three older brothers, and the one who this story is about is still like a grown up kid when it comes to me. He actually has four kids of his own now and when his boys pick on his only girl he gets onto them. Yet, five seconds later he’s messing with me (we’re currently neighbors 🤦🏼♀️ so I cant even escape him in quarantine! Lol)
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hmm…interesting how I have never stopped by this joint before.
enjoyed this read. was just like a book!
you have a talent for writing a not-so-wonderful-childhood-memory with such good spirits.
it took a lot of forgiveness for me to get over my pops whacking me for so many years.
in my parents’ case, they used things like a curtain rod to hit us with. although I’ve seen how badly belts cause welts too.
very happy for you to have grown to look at such memories with humor and fondness.
cheers!
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Yeah, to be honest we didnt have it bad at all. And even with a belt, there were never welts.
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